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Fanfuckingtastic

I love it man. Only thing I see that needs work on, is the cymbal "fade-ins" as i like to call them needs a bit of work. And the taiko drums fading in as well. The snare drum sounds too high. if it had more of a presence, and was a little louder, I would for sure rate this 11/10 instead of 10/10 lmao

:3 good work man.

saintedix responds:

Thanks for the review Flawp! I changed the snare and cymbal to be a little more tolerable as per your comment.

Very true.

It's really true dude.

Amazing lyrics.

HeLLsGaUrDiAn responds:

Thanks for the review and for the words, stay up.

I tried what DaniMart2005 said to do.

And she s'd my d. :D

No but this is funny. I like it. Very humorous.

AccountableMasses responds:

I'm glad you like it.

Eerie.

This sounds amazing.

Almost 7 minutes of straight up zoning out. I love it.

floccari responds:

Thanks! That's what I love about ambient, it almost makes you forget where you are...

Very dark.

I actually think it would be a lot better if it was like in a video game. It sounds more like background music.

However, volume needs to be up. SLIGHTLY, but not too quiet. And it sounds looped. But I like it. Amazing job.

floccari responds:

Getting the mastering right is always difficult with a big dynamic range; I always end up going back and messing with it later. Actually, there's no loops at all in this I played it that way because I was going for a repeating theme that strikes with the same sound, but deeper each time. Thanks for the review!

Random Notes.

Yeeeeaaaah. No, headphones are a plus for people who need help hearing. I need help hearing after hearing this.

Highly annoying synths.
FPC drum kit is everyone's friends.

Dark-Chameleon responds:

Trust me, the notes aren't random, even if you think so.

I generally tend to flip out at blatant antagonism, but I don't know a lot of people round here and you speak with an air of authority and self-importance. God knows I don't want to call out a moderator for being a dick!

Decent.

The original song made me cry like a bitch. HOWEVER, this techno song made me just laugh.

If it was slower, and had a like, r&b drum beat, I would give this 10/10. But I'm gonna give you a fair response, and give you 8/10.

BotonyProduktions responds:

Yea i hear you. The original is a great song. I was trying to like, mix hip hop with this song. Didnt work out to well, but i gave it a shot. Thanks for your honesty, and your vote.

I honestly think

that this song would sound amazing with a better solo. And obviously a better sounding amp. But believe me, this is a LOT better than what other people can do. I give you a bunch of kudos for this.

My only complaint is the notes that sounded out of place like the whiney bendy stuff at 1:00 and on is absolutely not fitting. I hate it. HOWEVER it was a brilliant attempt. For creativeness I give you 10/10.

Good job, dude.

GronmonSE responds:

Hey, welcome to Newgrounds.

I was going to make a full song without the sloppy solo but decided to just record whatever I played and upload it.

There's a lot of really good stuff here on Newgrounds, you'd be surprised. Upload some of your stuff sometime, I'm interested :D

By the way, check out my serious songs sometime ;)

Hm. Not much to say. I make music. It's my life. My music displays how I'm feeling. For upbeat techno songs, normally means that the state of mind I was in was bouncy. Metal normally means same shit, different day, different song.

Brandon McKagan @FLawp

Age 31, Male

Music Composer

Cascade Highschool

Everett Washington

Joined on 1/27/10

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